The three part paragraph... (HELLEN KELLER)

TOPIC SENTENCE
Hellen Keller said; “Although the world is full of suffering, it is also full of overcoming it.” This can be seen all around us. Many people have faced great obstacles in their lives but have found ways to overcome and actually benefit from these obstacles.
SUPPORTING SENTENCES
Greg Barton had limited mobility. But even so, he taught himself to walk, and even to run. After many years of training and perseverance she made the Olympic team and became an Olympic medalist in kayaking.
He was an Olympic athlete and medalist despite having a physical disability. He had club feet, his toes pointed inward, and as a result, he could not walk easily. Even after a series of operations, he still had limited mobility. And as a result could never be an Olympic runner to overcome it he discovered kayaking, a perfect sport for he because it required minimal leg and foot muscles. Using his upper body strength, he was able to master the sport. And after many years of training and perseverance he became an Olympic athlete. His perseverance and willpower help he to overcome her problem.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE
“In short, even though that road was paved with obstacles, he was able to overcome them and achieve the impossible”